Evaluation of our first pitch

The first pitch that we presente to the panel did not turn out as well as we planned and we realised that we didnt think about what we wanted to do properly. The fact that we planned to use children could be seen as dangerous by some people. We also didn't check if we would first even have the permission of the parents to be able to film their children and our feedback suggested to us that our initial idea may be quite a sensitive subject so we had decided to change it. Presenting the pitch went quite well but we realised how we could do better and we have corrected it and presented it in our final pitch.