It was suggested that we thought about the content of the film, for example our main idea of having a man playing with children and holding them hostage may have been too close to the subject of peadophilia, so as a group we came together and thought of another idea. Our pitch was edited and our new idea had been created. It uses the same idea of the male, lonely, psychotic character but we changed it to him being alone because of the murder of his family. The locations, some of the planned shots and lightig ideas have stayed the same, but some ideas now have slight differences.
Here is the new pitch. :)